雅思作文
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this is a pie chart shows the peoportion of the meat sold in a supermarket.the total meat sold in the supermarket is classified in to six types as follows: chicken,pork,beer,lamb,fish and others.
Overall,chicken has the largest proportion ,which accounts for 40%;
while others has the smallest percentage ,at 2%
As can be see in the pie chart ,chicken,which makes up 40% ,is the most popular among the total meat sold, then next is ork with 20% ,followed by beef,constituting 18%; and finally come lamb,fish and others at 15%,5% and 2% respectively . It should be noted that the sale of pork is half as much as that of chicken. And it is also interesting to note theat the sale of chicken is 20 times as much as that of others.
It can be concluded from the pie chart that chicken is the most commonly bought meat while others is the least commonly bought meat
我觉得不要一直用一样的格式，老师看了很多一样的格式会很烦的，批起来就会扣多点 。
对立式观点
1. 选择一方观点进行说明
给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生支持一方并进行说明。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people like A, others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? Give specific reasons t to illustrate your answer.
在这个命题形式的摸版中有些大写字母的含义如下：
A和B表示选择的两种观点；
CHOOSE A和CHOOSE B表示对A，B的选择；
DO C指题目中提及的某件事情，如：Some people prefer A in order to DO C.
请考生在实际写作中根据题目天如他们各自所代表的内容。
MODEL (1)
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer①because I think A has more advantages.
There are numerous reasons why②, and I would like in here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that③. It can be given a concrete example④.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that⑤. Take the case of a thing that⑥.
One very strong argument for A is that⑦. This demonstrate the undeniable fact that⑧.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, ⑨.
But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than hose of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that⊙.
①表明自己的观点；赞同
②填入赞同A的句子
③赞同A的第一个原因
④举例说明原因一
⑤赞同A的第二个原因
⑥举例说明原因二
⑦说明赞叹A的第三个原因
⑧表明A的优势
⑨列出B的1-2个优势
⊙总结观点
MODEL (2)
Some people believe A. These people point out the fact that①. However, other people believe B. They point out that②. They say that③. As far as I am concerned, my preference is for A.
The main reason why I prefer A is that④. We can see that⑤.
A more personal reason why I like A is⑥. As I member, ⑦.
A is superior in another way, that is ⑧ because that⑨.
As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A, such as⊙. But these can be compensated by its advantages. So, in comparison with B, A is surely a clever choice.
①支持A的理由
②支持B的理由
③进一步阐述支持B的原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤举例说明原因一
⑥支持A的第二个原因
⑦举例说明原因二
⑧支持A的第三个原因
⑨举例说明原因三
⊙列举出A的劣势
MODEL (3)
It is often difficult for people to decide whether to choose A or choose B. But for us students, the advantages of A always outweigh the disadvantages. Those who object A claim that①.
Although at first glance these arguments sound reasonable and appealing, they are not borne out by a careful consideration. ②
In addition, ③. As a result, ④.
Finally, the incomparable advantages of A is that ⑤.
From the above, I think A has a lot of advantages compared with B. So⑥.
①反对A的理由
②支持A的第一个原因并举例说明
③支持A的第二个原因并举例说明
④A的优势
⑤支持A的第三个原因并举例说明
⑥重申观点
2. 比较不同观点的优劣
给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点，并给出理由。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.
Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.
However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.
In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
①人们支持B的第一个原因
②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因
③支持B的第二个原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因
⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因
⑦支持A的第二个原因
⑧选择A的第一个好处
⑨选择A的第二个好处
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.
For A, ③
But this also demonstrates that④
Moreover, ⑤
B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.
In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
①人们的第一种观点
②人们的第二种观点
③A的一个优势
④A所隐含的劣势
⑤A的一个大缺点
⑥B的一个明显优势
⑦举例说明B的优势
⑧对我来讲，B的第一个优势
⑨对我来讲，B的第二个优势
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：
Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：
However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
一、跳槽的原因及解决办法
1.相关词汇： Fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly, keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society
2.原因： (1)社会压力大，人们的竞争意识增强，不断改变以适应社会的变化
(2)处于个人发展的需要，寻求升职，更新知识
(3)金钱的诱惑，不在乎在哪儿工作，做什么职业，只要挣钱多
(4)家庭原因，spouse工作地点改变或孩子去其他地方上学
3.解决方法：
(1)要理性看待，一般来说，stability equals success
(2)chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ,not reliable
(3)政府和mass media应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方，扎扎实实干事业，并且尽可能提高welfare,改善城市和community的环境，留住人才
(4)公司应该提高工资待遇，给employee创造一个良好的工作环境，在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展，增加培训，扩充员工的知识
二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识，大学的主要功能是什么
平衡写：
1. 认为应该提供实际知识的：
(1)大学生毕业就要找工作，因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能
(2)有人甚至声称理论没用，不是每个大学生都要做科学家
2. 反对方
(1) It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要，理论指导实践，大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术，更重要的是教授一种方法
(2) 不学理论只学实际知识，会使学生变成utilitarian, narrow-minded, lack of imagination，如果学生要学的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school
3. 总之，我认为大学的功能是versatile的，促进学生all-around development,培养学生具有creative mind in some special field,而不只是教授该领域的实际知识，可以通过一些part-time job来获得。
三、个人不能对环境保护做不了什么，同意不同意
This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection
1. 分析环境恶化原因是缺乏环保意识
2. 给出解决办法
四、维持博物馆是否是浪费金钱？
1. 政府应该spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people.有的人认为是浪费钱，我认为是很有必要的。
2.博物馆很重要(博物馆的作用)
(1)illuminate the culture, history and arts of the world. 比如，世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts , collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake!
(2)shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country’s traditional culture.
(2)serve as a significant mean of adolescent education, benefit both the present and future generation. 教育学生什么是美，purify their heart，也可以作为第二课堂，提供教学参考
3.不是浪费金钱
(1)这种观点是shortsighted，只是从个人的利益出发，政府应该站在一个更高的角度去看问题。对国家的经济和人民生活是有很大促进作用的
(2)不同于其他产业，不能让其自生自灭，否则可能很难生存
(3)花的钱多，个人没有能力支付。
五、考试
1. Used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fail in a subject
2. 不能evaluate one’s true ability.只是测试memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure.
高分does not mean possessing creativity in dealing various problems
3. Encourage bad study habits, emphasis on memorizing 考试内容 rather than to think。考试前非常用功，但是考试后forget all the information
4. lower the standards of teaching, deprive teachers of freedom. Teacher are judge by the examination results of students, 老师只顾教了考试技巧。
5. 考试是可以作为评判学生的一个依据，但是不能是唯一evaluation.
六、科技(电话，电脑)的利与弊
1. On the positive side,
(1) make life faster, easier and safer (2) the world is becoming smaller and closer, trains cars plains make possible to travel to distant places (3)modern communication tools,使人们更好的交流，与任何地方的人交流，特别使促进了business的发展(4)longer life expectancy由于progress of medical science (5)电影电视made life enjoyable and colorful (6)计算机和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-education
2. On the negative side, (1)机器的使用造成unemployment(2)电话和互联网的使用alienate people from their friends 因为lack adequate face-to-face communication. (3)Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills.Those who indulge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and with drawn.
七、彻底禁止吸烟
1. 从经济方面，contribute much to government revenue,如果baned ,则会导致unemployment
2. 从权利方面，Smoking just a hobby and amusement, 人们有权选择自己的 lifestyle
3. 从健康方面，必须承认抽闲是detrimental to health,但是the harm is exaggerated.如果控制每天的吸烟量，不会对健康造成devastating problem. 而且还有relieve stress 和 calm down.历史上有一些伟人吸烟，毛泽东，邓小平，他们仍然enjoy long life expectancy.
八、老年人问题
1.take care by children 和in nursing homes 各有优缺点
2.在家的话，老人可以享受与家人交流的机会，这样他们不会孤独，而且还可以照顾小孩，而且他们的经验对人们的事业和家庭生活都有帮助。但是由于老人经常会出现健康问题，因此需要花很多时间照料，影响人们的工作。
3. 在nursing home的话，可以有更多机会与their peers相处，common language and interest,而且现在的条件越来越好，得到专业的照顾及医疗服务，还有proper diet 对他们的健康有利。而且让小孩有充分的时间工作，追求自己的事业。但是缺少与家人的交流，会使他们感到lonely，出现一些psychological problem而且如果将所有老人都放到rest home,将给政府增加财政负担。
4. As neither the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of …, I favor the combination of the two.
九、如何对待罪犯
1.criminals 应该be locked up in prison(jails).
2. can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment for law-abiding citizens. Thieves ,robbers, rapists and murders are dangerous, pose potential threat to the society
3. 放到监狱教育是一个很好的方式，让他们知道侵犯其他人的权利是要付出代价的，这样就会减少他们再次犯罪的可能性
4.不但是punish criminals but also deters the potential criminals. 有些有犯罪倾向的人由于害怕被处罚，可能会放弃commit crime.
5.应该放到监狱。Just as the old saying goes, mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.
十、古迹是否应该保留
1. Historic building is useful for studies. 每个阶段都有不同的建筑，反映当时的文化，研究他们可以理解evolution of society and culture. 社会发展是 continuously的，the later generation bases on and inherits from the former.因此,获取这些是非常必要的。
2.Bring advantages of tourism.很多外国人和本国人都对古代文化很感兴趣，因此保留古迹可以吸引很多游客，bring much benefit to the country. 如果都是高楼大厦的话，在自己的城市也可以看到，谁还去旅游。
3. 古代建筑中也有一些我们值得学习的技术，不是所有技术都传下来了，有些建筑的奥秘现在人们还不是完全清楚。十一、动物保护(动物实验)
1. 共同生活在一个地球上，应该保护动物，maltreatment to animals is barbaric and uncivilized practice. 但是说动物濒临灭绝是exaggerated，禁止动物实验更是irrational
2. Select the superior and eliminate the inferior, the survival of the fittest 是一个natural rule can not be violated，有些specifies缺乏生存技能，就应该被淘汰，如果人们的过渡干预反而会造成坏的作用对ecological system.当然，如果是因为人类破坏了其habitat而导致的endanger,另当别论。
3. 动物实验是indispensable for medical research, all of which 是为人类造福，没有人不希望在全球范围内消灭AIDS，而这一切需要大量的生物实验来完成。而且目前还没有有效的alternative methods,计算机还不足以仿真整个生物实验，或许以后有替代方法了，就可以取消动物实验。目前能做的只能是减小痛苦，relieve pain.
4. 有人说吃动物的肉很残忍，让大家都做vegetarian, 在我看来很可笑，动物有生命，植物就没有生命了？这么说人类就该饿死starve to death 。因此，只要不是虐待动物，将他们作为食物和衣服 is not blameworthy.
5. 因此我不赞成… 【访问中国雅思网www.cnielts.com获取更多雅思考试资讯】
十二、青少年犯罪与Drug abuse
1. 原因：
(1)电视中的暴力与色情
(2)家庭原因：Increasing divorce rate, Brought up in a sole-parent family, 缺少父母的关爱,psychological problem, feel disoriented.
(3)学校原因：schools and society should be responsible在学校学习压力大，就业压力大
(4)自身原因：不成熟，sequacious，lack of self-control an self-discipline, can not resist the temptation of drugs and fall victims to drug dealers.
2. 解决方法：
(1)政府应该strict censorship should be imposed on 媒体中的不健康内容
(2)家长应该多关心
(3)政府和学校应该多教育，不能只顾academic performance
十三、学生评价老师
1. Drawbacks:
(1)学生还不够成熟，他们往往从自身的经验和利益出发来评价老师，因此unable to evaluate teachers’ performance in a sound way。可能会出现要求严格的老师不受欢迎的情况。
(2)学生评价老师也会对老师产生不好的影响，老师为了cater for the needs of children and get a high evaluation, 从而放松对学生的要求，而且对教学内容和教学效果也会有影响
2. Advantages:
(1)对学生来说，评价老师有利于培养学生think independently. 应该鼓励学生challenge 老师，这样他们不但学到知识，而且具有innovative思维，敢于超越老师。
(2)对老师来说，获得feedback 也是提高自己教学能力和教学效果的有效途径，也有利于培养老师的竞争意识，不断学习，不断完善自己来满足学生的学习要求。
(3)学生交了学费，就是customer,老师提供教学服务，从这点上说，学生也有权评价老师。
参考资料：http://news.koolearn.com/t_10449_1_267216.html
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有模板的都是低分的，不用模板，写出自己心里想说的，考官就会给你高分的，你看高分范文有模板吗？如果是小作文，是可以套套模板的 。
给你一点吧：
我看着书,打给你看
this is a pie chart shows the peoportion of the meat sold in a supermarket.the total meat sold in the supermarket is classified in to six types as follows: chicken,pork,beer,lamb,fish and others.
Overall,chicken has the largest proportion ,which accounts for 40%;
while others has the smallest percentage ,at 2%
As can be see in the pie chart ,chicken,which makes up 40% ,is the most popular among the total meat sold, then next is ork with 20% ,followed by beef,constituting 18%; and finally come lamb,fish and others at 15%,5% and 2% respectively . It should be noted that the sale of pork is half as much as that of chicken. And it is also interesting to note theat the sale of chicken is 20 times as much as that of others.
It can be concluded from the pie chart that chicken is the most commonly bought meat while others is the least commonly bought meat
我觉得不要一直用一样的格式，老师看了很多一样的格式会很烦的，批起来就会扣多点 。
对立式观点
1. 选择一方观点进行说明
给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生支持一方并进行说明。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people like A, others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? Give specific reasons t to illustrate your answer.
在这个命题形式的摸版中有些大写字母的含义如下：
A和B表示选择的两种观点；
CHOOSE A和CHOOSE B表示对A，B的选择；
DO C指题目中提及的某件事情，如：Some people prefer A in order to DO C.
请考生在实际写作中根据题目天如他们各自所代表的内容。
MODEL (1)
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer①because I think A has more advantages.
There are numerous reasons why②, and I would like in here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that③. It can be given a concrete example④.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that⑤. Take the case of a thing that⑥.
One very strong argument for A is that⑦. This demonstrate the undeniable fact that⑧.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, ⑨.
But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than hose of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that⊙.
①表明自己的观点；赞同
②填入赞同A的句子
③赞同A的第一个原因
④举例说明原因一
⑤赞同A的第二个原因
⑥举例说明原因二
⑦说明赞叹A的第三个原因
⑧表明A的优势
⑨列出B的1-2个优势
⊙总结观点
MODEL (2)
Some people believe A. These people point out the fact that①. However, other people believe B. They point out that②. They say that③. As far as I am concerned, my preference is for A.
The main reason why I prefer A is that④. We can see that⑤.
A more personal reason why I like A is⑥. As I member, ⑦.
A is superior in another way, that is ⑧ because that⑨.
As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A, such as⊙. But these can be compensated by its advantages. So, in comparison with B, A is surely a clever choice.
①支持A的理由
②支持B的理由
③进一步阐述支持B的原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤举例说明原因一
⑥支持A的第二个原因
⑦举例说明原因二
⑧支持A的第三个原因
⑨举例说明原因三
⊙列举出A的劣势
MODEL (3)
It is often difficult for people to decide whether to choose A or choose B. But for us students, the advantages of A always outweigh the disadvantages. Those who object A claim that①.
Although at first glance these arguments sound reasonable and appealing, they are not borne out by a careful consideration. ②
In addition, ③. As a result, ④.
Finally, the incomparable advantages of A is that ⑤.
From the above, I think A has a lot of advantages compared with B. So⑥.
①反对A的理由
②支持A的第一个原因并举例说明
③支持A的第二个原因并举例说明
④A的优势
⑤支持A的第三个原因并举例说明
⑥重申观点
2. 比较不同观点的优劣
给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点，并给出理由。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.
Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.
However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.
In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
①人们支持B的第一个原因
②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因
③支持B的第二个原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因
⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因
⑦支持A的第二个原因
⑧选择A的第一个好处
⑨选择A的第二个好处
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.
For A, ③
But this also demonstrates that④
Moreover, ⑤
B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.
In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
①人们的第一种观点
②人们的第二种观点
③A的一个优势
④A所隐含的劣势
⑤A的一个大缺点
⑥B的一个明显优势
⑦举例说明B的优势
⑧对我来讲，B的第一个优势
⑨对我来讲，B的第二个优势
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：
Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：
However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
一、跳槽的原因及解决办法
1.相关词汇： Fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly, keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society
2.原因： (1)社会压力大，人们的竞争意识增强，不断改变以适应社会的变化
(2)处于个人发展的需要，寻求升职，更新知识
(3)金钱的诱惑，不在乎在哪儿工作，做什么职业，只要挣钱多
(4)家庭原因，spouse工作地点改变或孩子去其他地方上学
3.解决方法：
(1)要理性看待，一般来说，stability equals success
(2)chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ,not reliable
(3)政府和mass media应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方，扎扎实实干事业，并且尽可能提高welfare,改善城市和community的环境，留住人才
(4)公司应该提高工资待遇，给employee创造一个良好的工作环境，在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展，增加培训，扩充员工的知识
二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识，大学的主要功能是什么
平衡写：
1. 认为应该提供实际知识的：
(1)大学生毕业就要找工作，因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能
(2)有人甚至声称理论没用，不是每个大学生都要做科学家
2. 反对方
(1) It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要，理论指导实践，大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术，更重要的是教授一种方法
(2) 不学理论只学实际知识，会使学生变成utilitarian, narrow-minded, lack of imagination，如果学生要学的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school
3. 总之，我认为大学的功能是versatile的，促进学生all-around development,培养学生具有creative mind in some special field,而不只是教授该领域的实际知识，可以通过一些part-time job来获得。
三、个人不能对环境保护做不了什么，同意不同意
This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection
1. 分析环境恶化原因是缺乏环保意识
2. 给出解决办法
四、维持博物馆是否是浪费金钱？
1. 政府应该spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people.有的人认为是浪费钱，我认为是很有必要的。
2.博物馆很重要(博物馆的作用)
(1)illuminate the culture, history and arts of the world. 比如，世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts , collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake!
(2)shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country’s traditional culture.
(2)serve as a significant mean of adolescent education, benefit both the present and future generation. 教育学生什么是美，purify their heart，也可以作为第二课堂，提供教学参考
3.不是浪费金钱
(1)这种观点是shortsighted，只是从个人的利益出发，政府应该站在一个更高的角度去看问题。对国家的经济和人民生活是有很大促进作用的
(2)不同于其他产业，不能让其自生自灭，否则可能很难生存
(3)花的钱多，个人没有能力支付。
五、考试
1. Used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fail in a subject
2. 不能evaluate one’s true ability.只是测试memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure.
高分does not mean possessing creativity in dealing various problems
3. Encourage bad study habits, emphasis on memorizing 考试内容 rather than to think。考试前非常用功，但是考试后forget all the information
4. lower the standards of teaching, deprive teachers of freedom. Teacher are judge by the examination results of students, 老师只顾教了考试技巧。
5. 考试是可以作为评判学生的一个依据，但是不能是唯一evaluation.
六、科技(电话，电脑)的利与弊
1. On the positive side,
(1) make life faster, easier and safer (2) the world is becoming smaller and closer, trains cars plains make possible to travel to distant places (3)modern communication tools,使人们更好的交流，与任何地方的人交流，特别使促进了business的发展(4)longer life expectancy由于progress of medical science (5)电影电视made life enjoyable and colorful (6)计算机和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-education
2. On the negative side, (1)机器的使用造成unemployment(2)电话和互联网的使用alienate people from their friends 因为lack adequate face-to-face communication. (3)Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills.Those who indulge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and with drawn.
七、彻底禁止吸烟
1. 从经济方面，contribute much to government revenue,如果baned ,则会导致unemployment
2. 从权利方面，Smoking just a hobby and amusement, 人们有权选择自己的 lifestyle
3. 从健康方面，必须承认抽闲是detrimental to health,但是the harm is exaggerated.如果控制每天的吸烟量，不会对健康造成devastating problem. 而且还有relieve stress 和 calm down.历史上有一些伟人吸烟，毛泽东，邓小平，他们仍然enjoy long life expectancy.
八、老年人问题
1.take care by children 和in nursing homes 各有优缺点
2.在家的话，老人可以享受与家人交流的机会，这样他们不会孤独，而且还可以照顾小孩，而且他们的经验对人们的事业和家庭生活都有帮助。但是由于老人经常会出现健康问题，因此需要花很多时间照料，影响人们的工作。
3. 在nursing home的话，可以有更多机会与their peers相处，common language and interest,而且现在的条件越来越好，得到专业的照顾及医疗服务，还有proper diet 对他们的健康有利。而且让小孩有充分的时间工作，追求自己的事业。但是缺少与家人的交流，会使他们感到lonely，出现一些psychological problem而且如果将所有老人都放到rest home,将给政府增加财政负担。
4. As neither the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of …, I favor the combination of the two.
九、如何对待罪犯
1.criminals 应该be locked up in prison(jails).
2. can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment for law-abiding citizens. Thieves ,robbers, rapists and murders are dangerous, pose potential threat to the society
3. 放到监狱教育是一个很好的方式，让他们知道侵犯其他人的权利是要付出代价的，这样就会减少他们再次犯罪的可能性
4.不但是punish criminals but also deters the potential criminals. 有些有犯罪倾向的人由于害怕被处罚，可能会放弃commit crime.
5.应该放到监狱。Just as the old saying goes, mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.
十、古迹是否应该保留
1. Historic building is useful for studies. 每个阶段都有不同的建筑，反映当时的文化，研究他们可以理解evolution of society and culture. 社会发展是 continuously的，the later generation bases on and inherits from the former.因此,获取这些是非常必要的。
2.Bring advantages of tourism.很多外国人和本国人都对古代文化很感兴趣，因此保留古迹可以吸引很多游客，bring much benefit to the country. 如果都是高楼大厦的话，在自己的城市也可以看到，谁还去旅游。
3. 古代建筑中也有一些我们值得学习的技术，不是所有技术都传下来了，有些建筑的奥秘现在人们还不是完全清楚。十一、动物保护(动物实验)
1. 共同生活在一个地球上，应该保护动物，maltreatment to animals is barbaric and uncivilized practice. 但是说动物濒临灭绝是exaggerated，禁止动物实验更是irrational
2. Select the superior and eliminate the inferior, the survival of the fittest 是一个natural rule can not be violated，有些specifies缺乏生存技能，就应该被淘汰，如果人们的过渡干预反而会造成坏的作用对ecological system.当然，如果是因为人类破坏了其habitat而导致的endanger,另当别论。
3. 动物实验是indispensable for medical research, all of which 是为人类造福，没有人不希望在全球范围内消灭AIDS，而这一切需要大量的生物实验来完成。而且目前还没有有效的alternative methods,计算机还不足以仿真整个生物实验，或许以后有替代方法了，就可以取消动物实验。目前能做的只能是减小痛苦，relieve pain.
4. 有人说吃动物的肉很残忍，让大家都做vegetarian, 在我看来很可笑，动物有生命，植物就没有生命了？这么说人类就该饿死starve to death 。因此，只要不是虐待动物，将他们作为食物和衣服 is not blameworthy.
5. 因此我不赞成… 【访问中国雅思网www.cnielts.com获取更多雅思考试资讯】
十二、青少年犯罪与Drug abuse
1. 原因：
(1)电视中的暴力与色情
(2)家庭原因：Increasing divorce rate, Brought up in a sole-parent family, 缺少父母的关爱,psychological problem, feel disoriented.
(3)学校原因：schools and society should be responsible在学校学习压力大，就业压力大
(4)自身原因：不成熟，sequacious，lack of self-control an self-discipline, can not resist the temptation of drugs and fall victims to drug dealers.
2. 解决方法：
(1)政府应该strict censorship should be imposed on 媒体中的不健康内容
(2)家长应该多关心
(3)政府和学校应该多教育，不能只顾academic performance
十三、学生评价老师
1. Drawbacks:
(1)学生还不够成熟，他们往往从自身的经验和利益出发来评价老师，因此unable to evaluate teachers’ performance in a sound way。可能会出现要求严格的老师不受欢迎的情况。
(2)学生评价老师也会对老师产生不好的影响，老师为了cater for the needs of children and get a high evaluation, 从而放松对学生的要求，而且对教学内容和教学效果也会有影响
2. Advantages:
(1)对学生来说，评价老师有利于培养学生think independently. 应该鼓励学生challenge 老师，这样他们不但学到知识，而且具有innovative思维，敢于超越老师。
(2)对老师来说，获得feedback 也是提高自己教学能力和教学效果的有效途径，也有利于培养老师的竞争意识，不断学习，不断完善自己来满足学生的学习要求。
(3)学生交了学费，就是customer,老师提供教学服务，从这点上说，学生也有权评价老师。
参考资料：http://news.koolearn.com/t_10449_1_267216.html
雅思作文~
【雅思TASK2 （大作文） 要求字数250】
【题目：In many countries, fossil fuels such as coal, natural gas and crude oil are the main sources of energy while in some other countries, the use of alternative sources of energy such as wind power and solar energy is increasingly encouraged. To what extent do you think this is a positive development?】
【习作正文】【本篇共计300字】
With the flourish of manufacturing industries and the amelioration of living standards, many states are confronted with a severe surge of energy demand. To fulfill that, instead of the fossil fuels, some countries are stimulating the utilization of alterative sources of energy, which are more environment-friendly and low-carbon, such as solar energy, tidal power, geothermal energy, and so forth. As far as I am concerned, this is an applicable and sensible avenue to relief the energy crisis and environment contamination.
Undeniably, since the Industrial Revolution (1750), mankind has depended on fossil fuels, which the electricity mainly generates from. However, say none exaggeratedly, that is the proximate cause of the environmental contamination and the global warming in the recent decades. Moreover, the toxic gas, such as sulphur dioxide and nitrogen oxides, as well as the contaminated water is dreadfully poisonous to human being, flora and fauna.
As an alternative for the conventional energy sources, especially considering the various troubles that brings, the clean energies are playing an increasingly significant role in the modern life and production. For instance, growing hybrid electronic vehicles are chosen by the general population, and more solar roofs are utilized by the manufacturers. Consequently, less contaminating exhaust will be emitted and all the publics are accessed to a better city and better life.
Furthermore, taking a different angle, these alternative sources of energy also create considerable economic benefits. Currently, with the aggravation of the global inflation, crude oil and natural resources prices have remained in high-level, which raise the cost of domestic manufacturing industries, whereas these problems can be solved by encouraging the utilization of the renewable and sustainable alternative sources.
To sum up, from my point of view, the alternative energy sources are the top-priority choice to achieve the win-win situation between the environment and economy.
老师联系方式呀。。也就是他本人名字。
老师自己的证书呀
首先呢 这个老师是外籍小哥哥，感觉教学思路和国内的培训班有点不同，完全不赞同模版作文
这老师的理念就是一篇文章要反复修改才能进步
先和他聊了很多雅思作文的误区，然后就试着让他给我指出一些方法，帮我修改我自己的作文。
之后才觉得运气非常好找到这个老师，非常耐心而且认真，专业水平也非常高。每次还给我布置作业，两百字的作文给我了90个备注。有总体评论有细节评论，总体结构和语法词汇全部都非常详细的教我。而且批改过后有问题可以随时联系他问问题。重写过后还免费批改。最重要的是他全部都是用我自己原来的观点，还帮我改写到9分哈哈 敲厉害的啊
还有就是他会针对我的薄弱环节设置不同的练习，有针对性的练习，并且在我快临近考试的时候给了我一个语法专项的练习，我觉得语法对我后来的出分还是有相当大的帮助的。
总之就是相当感谢这个这么负责的老师哈哈哈雅思分手全靠这老师
希望久久不能出坑的小伙伴们也能早日分手啦！毕竟考试费用越来越高了。。。
大家可以都可以这老师聊一下呀，毕竟咨询是免费的嘻嘻！
祝大家考试都顺利啦！
#法养耐# 雅思写作5分作文 -
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#法养耐# 雅思作文题目常考的有哪些 -
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#法养耐# 雅思写作的写作要点和考点有哪些 -
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#法养耐# 如何写好雅思大作文 -
(17672141028)： 一、雅思大作文开头: 开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板. Nowadays many people discuss whether we need or not. Now whether. has become a very hot debate in society. As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different ...
#法养耐# 雅思小作文怎么提高? -
(17672141028)： 雅思的小作文还是比较简单的.首先,你把剑桥雅思的范文仔细分析下,看看满分作文的思路是怎样的,这个很重要,一定要认真!其次,参考下雅思作文参考书上的指点,比如说图表、饼状图、柱形图的写法,心中做到有数.再次,拿出一个图,不要着急写,马上说出你的思路,应该怎么写,这就是一个思维的训练.当然,作文下笔练习还是比较重要的,熟练掌握一些比较好的应付各种图的句式是相当重要的.相信按我说的做,多用心总结,一定可以拿到满意的分数的!!!我考过几次雅思,最后的作文成绩是7.5分,呵呵.
#法养耐# 需三篇英语雅思作文. -
(17672141028)： 《How to improve your confidence》 When I was studying ,my teachers and classmates always advised that I shoud have faith in myself. Practicably, I quite realize the importance of confidence, which is the key to success. But I 'm still at loss on how ...
#法养耐# 雅思作文.有高手能帮我在下面雅思作文题中选几道分别写下范文么.1.Government and large companies should be responsible to reduce the damage of the ... - 作业帮
(17672141028)：[答案] With the rapid development of economy and the excessive using of oil and coal,the air is changing.And such changing also constantly influences the weather and the climate.According to the fourth assessment report issued by the Climatic Change ...
#法养耐# 求雅思作文10篇.200字以内的.THANKS!!!! -
(17672141028)： 你好,很高兴为你解答:雅思写作7分范文:International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international ...
#法养耐# 雅思作文,150字以上 -
(17672141028)： 希望能帮上你 There is no doubt that many things had changed in the last few decades; some changes are for betterment and some changes are for worse. One of the fields which were greatly affected by the advent of technology is the way of ...
#法养耐# 雅思作文!!!
(17672141028)： In modern cities, erections have become one of city's identities, representing architect's concept and people's esthetic preference. Some people insist buildings should be built in more traditional styles, in order to highline the cultural identity, ...
